Heart
Well, I'm back at it! More writing goals, daily word counts, and projects galore! So little time to do so much that I feel like any time I spend not writing, I am falling behind. The ideas are pouring out of me, but my hands cannot keep up...
I think this is a good thing.
As previously promised, I have some blogs coming up where I'd like to focus on several experiences I've had at conventions this year, promoting and marketing, diversifying, and of course, finishing that first book!
But before I write any of those, I'd like to share a new project that will be published in September titled HEART: A FANTASY ABOUT ORGANS. Look for the cover very soon, but in the meantime, here is my first excerpt. I hope you enjoy. And as always, any feedback is much appreciated.
HEART
a fantasy about organs
Excerpt 1 from PART I: RED QUEEN
I think this is a good thing.
As previously promised, I have some blogs coming up where I'd like to focus on several experiences I've had at conventions this year, promoting and marketing, diversifying, and of course, finishing that first book!
But before I write any of those, I'd like to share a new project that will be published in September titled HEART: A FANTASY ABOUT ORGANS. Look for the cover very soon, but in the meantime, here is my first excerpt. I hope you enjoy. And as always, any feedback is much appreciated.
HEART
a fantasy about organs
Excerpt 1 from PART I: RED QUEEN
The two boys played skip-splash in the puddles outside the
great doors of the castle, seemingly unaware of the tension that filled their
elders. With nary a worry, their game continued moving – hop-splash!
Hop-splash! – leading them inexorably away from the growing knot of concerned
citizens, their parents among the crowd. But the two boys weren’t called back
as more people arrived, the crowd growing along with a murmuring dissension
that filled the courtyard enough to drown out the boys’ conversation when they
grew tired of their game.
“Why do we have to wait outside?” asked Jeriff, the youngest
of the two by nearly three years.
Karill, glad to display his greater knowledge at the grand
age of ten, puffed out his chest with his perceived self-importance.
“We’re here to see the Red Queen. Our ma’s and pa’s got sum
big things they gotta ask.”
“What big things?”
Karill hadn’t expected that question, so he searched his
mind quickly for an answer.
“Important stuff. Like…” Kerill paused again, trying to
remember what his parents had been arguing about. “… like higher levies.”
Kerill didn’t know what levies were, but he knew they must
be very important for his ma and pa to dress in their finest festival clothes
and shut down their little shop for the day as they made their long trek from
the outer edges of the city to the castle gates. He hoped Jeriff wouldn’t ask
what they were, because then he might have to admit he didn’t know. But when
Jeriff next spoke, it was with a completely unexpected question.
“Why do they call her the Red Queen?”
Happy at the change in subject, Kerill considered the
question, reviewing the gossip he'd heard in the streets.
“Janet, the baker’s oldest son, told me they call her the
Red Queen 'cause she always dresses in red.”
Red was an exotic color, reserved only for the nobility and
merchants who could afford the exorbitant price of the dye.
“Everything?” asked Jeriff, astounded at the idea. “Even her
cloak?”
“Cloak, gown, crown, rubies, jewels, rings, hair. All of it.
They say she even paints her hands 'n face red, 'n her castle is full of
endless rooms of red silk n' painted glass 'cause she can’t stand any other
color.
“Wow,” breathed Jeriff, his imagination caught with wonder.
“I wanna see her, all in red! The Red Queen!” he suddenly shouted, entranced by the
idea, spontaneously spinning in a circle and hopping back into a small puddle.
“Do you know, her hair isn’t really red,” a new voice broke
in, deep and low, but unmistakably feminine.
Instantly, both boys whirled around to see a cloaked figure
standing in a nearby alcove.
Jeriff knew immediately that something was wrong. Fear stole
through him as he realized he and Kerill had wandered too far away from their
parents to cry out for help. But despite his premonition, the figure did not
move, did not threaten the boys in any way.
And Kerill, in his innocence and newfound wonder, did not
miss a beat.
“No red hair? But what about rubies and a castle full of red
rooms.”
The figure stirred.
“Truth is as multi-faceted as the best-cut gem.”
“What does that mean?”
“I mean there is some truth in what you say, young man.
Sometimes, that is all that is needed.”
The murmuring crowd behind them suddenly spiked in volume.
“Let us in!”
“It’s our right!”
“Hear us, Queen!”
“Hear us!”
The cry was taken up by many, chanting voices
multiplied by the echoing courtyard.
“Yet other times, it is only harsher truths that will quiet
dissent.”
The woman’s voice, though no louder, had increased in
intensity, somehow cutting through the tumult to reach the ears of both boys clearly.
They looked up simultaneously, to find the shrouded form
suddenly standing between them.
“Watch, then, and learn why she is called the Red Queen.”
A wash of apprehension fluttered through the boys as the
cloaked figure moved away, sliding effortlessly between the growing and
gesticulating mob.
Their
game of skip-splash suddenly felt meaningless as the boys realized there was a
deeper game swirling around them, vibrating in the forgotten puddles reflecting
a desolate gray sky.
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