Work in Progress: DoP Update 2
Hello all! It's time for my weekly excerpt of "Depths of Perception." This next one is from the first part of the book and involves one of the main characters. Again, feel free to look up all the Latin words on Google translate or something similar. Meanwhile, enjoy!
Depths of Perception
Depths of Perception
Part I: Praesidium
The
current whispered past me, hinting at a warmth I’d rarely experienced, living
as I had in the depths of the ocean. It raised a shiver of curiosity down the
scales of my body, from the top of my upper limbs to the tips of my tails.
My
guard duty had brought me as far from the city as I was allowed to go. It was a
much-avoided assignment, for I was completely alone for two cycles and was a frilled
shark or other predator to attack me, I would have to fight it alone.
After
warning the city, of course.
But
truly, I didn’t mind. The dark clear water offered an endless horizon of
possibility, of freedom from the strict confines of the city and my life in the
praesidium caste, forever bound to
protect.
But
against what?
Warmth
slithered over my scales again. Curious, I decided to follow the current back
to its source. What could possibly produce such a temperature change that could
endure so close to the ocean floor?
Concentrating,
I accessed the microprocessor embedded in my spine, giving it the mental
sequence command: track current. The sensors in my eyes
created a dim green grid that began to assess the temperature differences in
the currents swirling around me. At the same time, tiny wires embedded in my
skin began to pulse in time to my heartbeat while also scanning the water. In a
few moments, the unusual stream was identified. As I kicked my tails out and
began moving, I wondered if following the current would be considered
insubordinate.
I’ll tell them the water was
calm in my sector and that I felt it prudent to make sure the unusual current
posed no potential threat to the city.
Truthfully,
I didn’t think I could convince them, but it was better to have such a thought
now when my memories could easily be searched later in one of the Auctor’s
psi-probes. So I stretched my body out and let my muscles enjoy their movements
through the water. There were endless drills and training, but rarely the
chance to swim at will to a far-reaching location, especially one that left the
city far behind.
Many
hours later, a line of deeper black rose began to smudge the distance. By now,
there were several warm water currents surrounding me, so I didn’t mind losing
the one I’d been following. Instead, I paused to study the ocean floor
stretching out in front of me.
Command: enhance vision, I directed the microchip.
Accordingly, my optics increased the light-dark ratio and overlay the images in
front of me with a bright green. I wanted to flick my inner lids closed at the
brightness, but instead gave my eyes a few moments to adjust. When they did,
the panorama in front of me showed a gradual upslope marked by tumbled rocks
scattered across the floor. As I swam closer, I noted that one area had a large
cluster covered with algae. It was only when I was within sonar range that I
saw the regular shape of it.
Command: analyze anomaly.
For
a brief moment, I wondered how my processor could recognize what it had never
seen, but the command embedded in my consciousness took over, distracting me as
it began to streak black lines across my vision.
Millennium era ship, wrecked
by hostile force.
Again,
frustration filled me as I wondered what the ‘millennium era’ was, knowing that
when I returned, an Auctor would simply access the data and expect me not to
ask questions – especially as I was praesidum,
born to follow orders. Still, I could see the ‘hostile force’ had somehow
torn a hole through one side of the long oblong shape.
Was
this why we were not allowed so far from the city?
But
as the current was coming from beyond the wreckage, I continued past it,
despite my desire to stop and explore. Not yet. First I needed to find the
source of the warmth.
The
line of tumbled rocks began to rise, becoming mammoth boulders in a broken line
that rose far above me as I continued swimming. The water was much warmer – in
fact, I could not recall a single moment in my life where I had felt warm to
such a degree. The ocean floor was cold and mostly lifeless, with only a few
large predators to deal with on occasion. My processor regulated my
temperature, so I had never truly paid any attention to the sensation. I had to
stop frequently to give my sensors a moment to catch up – they didn’t appear to
have been built with atypical temperature fluctuations in mind. Still, my heart
rate remained normal and my enhanced vision continued to function, so I
continued to head upward.
About
three quarters of the way up the slope, my eyes began to burn. I stopped and
hastily closed my inner and outer lids.
Command: disengage vision
enhance.
Cautiously,
my outer lids flicked back. Instead of utter darkness, the water was lit some
color I’d never seen.
Red, my processor supplied.
Fascinated,
my inner lids opened as well as I slowly started to move forward, looking
around myself as shapes reformed themselves under the new-colored light. I’d
lived my whole life with black, grey,
white, green, silver, blue. But red
was wholly new to me, and I found myself wondering, yet again, why the Auctors
had never described other colors. Because they knew, I was sure, the shades that filled our hidden histories.
The
currents swirled around me, marking my skin with touches of hot and cold
imprints. Certain now that I needed to know what lay at the top of the ridge, I
flexed my tails and shot up. The light grew stronger, less red and brighter light red.
Orange, the processor rang out in
my head.
Amazed,
I reached the highest peak. And quickly forced my inner lids shut as a wash of
heat and light stabbed at my eyes and skin. But the image remained clearly in
my mind. An abyss lay below me, a rent in the ocean floor. Through its center
ran a line of bright orange-red,
flowing in thick sheets.
Radioactive lava. Warning! Extreme danger.
Surprised,
I closed my outer lids to better read the data scrolling out of my processor.
Because of that, I didn’t see the rippling edge that signaled a shock wave
rolling towards me. Instead, I was suddenly caught in a riptide, conflicting
currents tearing at me from different directions, flipping my body carelessly
around. Despite my enhancements, it was several long minutes before I pulled
free by slipping into a nearby current. But I misjudged, not realizing how
strongly the current was moving directly upwards. I fought to escape, my
training screaming at me beware the
surface beware the surface as I struggled to kick myself out of moving
water. Yet I was well and truly caught, so I realigned my body to move with the
flow, ready to dive down the moment I freed myself.
Again,
I flicked opened my outer lids to see the light around me completely changed.
It was blue, a color I knew but a
shade I didn’t recognize. It was bright, nearly white, and when I looked down I
realized I could no longer see the ocean floor. Its absence sent a pulse of
panic through my veins, which I quickly suppressed with a mental nudge to my
heart, slowing it down.
Command: assess. A hum filled my mind as my
processor worked to obey.
Mesopelagic zone, also known
as twilight or middle pelagic zone. 800 meters wide. Insufficient light for
photosynthesis. The metalimnion, or thermocline, located in this region,
contains rapidly changing temperatures -
Frustrated,
I cut the feed off. Too many strange words sounded in my head. What was photosynthesis? What did my processor
mean by 800 meters wide? Were there
more layers? Years of schooling crashed in against me. We were taught that
there was only one ocean, made of up the seafloor,
the dark, and the predators. We were taught never to surface, and that safety lay
within the dark.
Yet
as I continued to drift up, able to escape the now-gentled current, I found
myself unwilling to deny the sheer strangeness of clearly seeing the open ocean
around me, though my inner lids remained firmly closed against the lightening
water.
Suddenly,
a white light went off in my sensors, barely visible in the brightness.
Warning! Within 50 meters of
epipelagic zone. Turn back.
Command:
cease alarm.
But my processor refused to
obey.
Numb with shock, I repeated myself.
Command:
cease alarm.
Warning!
Within 30 meters of epipelagic zone. Turn back immediately.
Angrily,
I readjusted the volume so I wouldn’t have to hear the repetitive chant. I took
a deep calming breath before turning my head to face towards the now-painfully
bright source of the light. With a defiant burst, I kicked my tails out to move
with the current.
Warning! Epipelagic zone
breached. Turn back immediately or –
Ruthlessly,
I lowered the volume to a subsonic level that I normally reserved to enhance my
biosonar call for long-range communication. I could still hear something like sound, but the words became a meaningless
series of notes.
Above
me, I could see a change in the water. Some disturbance was making it fracture
in unusual ways, but above it stretched an expanse of blue wide and calm. Something inside me hungered for the feel of
that ocean against my skin. My hands appeared, reaching up of their own accord
towards that unwavering vision above the whirling eddies splintering
ceaselessly over me.
Agony
arced through my nerves. My spine bent, the back of my head nearly touching my
tails. I tried to access my processor, to scream out a command, but the pain
kept me insensate and unable to move. My subsonic volume command dissolved as
words began to form.
Trepass! Initiating
involuntary removal via neural shock.
No… I merely wanted…
Trepass!
… to see…
Trepass!
… see…
Electricity
surged and arced, racing along my nerves.
Blackness.
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